This week for writting we had to complete this task called 'Show Not Tell'. In this task we had to ake the boring word on the left into a sentence on the left, This will help with descriptive writting.
Kia ora Will, Thanks for sharing your Show not Tell task. You have written some great sentences to show me your emotions. I especially liked the 'sad' example - tears were streaming down my eyes like a waterfall. You forgot to highlight your favourite sentence. Which one was it? Tania
Kia Ora Will Abbie here from Mamaku 2. I really like how you included different emotions in your work,My favourite sentence is "AAAAAAAAAAAAAGH STOP EATING THE PIE!!!" Next time you could add pictures for each emotion. Good bye from Abbie.
Kia ora Will,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your Show not Tell task. You have written some great sentences to show me your emotions. I especially liked the 'sad' example - tears were streaming down my eyes like a waterfall. You forgot to highlight your favourite sentence. Which one was it?
Tania
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Will Abbie here from Mamaku 2.
ReplyDeleteI really like how you included different emotions in your work,My favourite sentence is "AAAAAAAAAAAAAGH STOP EATING THE PIE!!!"
Next time you could add pictures for each emotion.
Good bye from Abbie.